Showing posts with label Writing For Personal Communication. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing For Personal Communication. Show all posts
Tuesday, March 26, 2019
My First
Two years ago I went to Ketapang Park. At that time the atmosphere was very crowded and the weather was cold. There, I rode a ship. This was the first time I got on a boat. I felt very nervous and scared if the boat sinks. Bbut I tried to calm down and rode the ship with my friends. Everynow and then I lean on my friend and hold his hand. Thescenery there at that time was very beautiful, so I began to enjoy my trip by boat without feeling nervous or ravenous anymore.h The next morning, I saw a scene that was equally beautiful, I saw a very beautiful sunrise. At that time the morning scenery was very beautiful and the day was very bright. Me and my friends would always remember this moment.
Tuesday, February 19, 2019
My experience learning English Language
Maybe this is a little bit different from other friends. At the moment I have been studying in English Language Education in Yogyakarta State University, even though I don't understand about English Language. Many of my friends are smart and fluent in English, while me? I'm not fluent yet. Most of my friends have already taken additional lesson besides school, maybe even since elementary school. Whereas I haven't. But it's okay. I have to try and I should do it.
Maybe this is a little bit different from other friends. At the moment I have been studying in English Language Education in Yogyakarta State University, even though I don't understand about English Language. Many of my friends are smart and fluent in English, while me? I'm not fluent yet. Most of my friends have already taken additional lesson besides school, maybe even since elementary school. Whereas I haven't. But it's okay. I have to try and I should do it.
Friday, January 4, 2019
REFLECTION
1. My Interest In Learning English, esp Writing
English has entered the structure of the language structure
in various countries as well. So, it would be good for us to know the meaning
of the words that enter our language structure because it can happen at any
time along with the times. There are many ways to improve your English skills,
for example, you can start by practicing speaking English, reading English
articles in newspapers, magazines or the internet, trying to make
English-language essays to improve your writing skills.
Use existing media to the maximum, such as: listening to
music or watching English-language films to improve your listening skills. But
basically, I like writing since the end of Elementary School. My friends say if
mey writing is good, then I like writing more.
Even though I’m still very lacking in grammar, but it’s
okay. I will still like it and will study harder.
2. My Opinion on Doing The Project-Based Learning
At the beginning of Project-Based learning I felt like I
could not follow, feeling lazy. I feel this activity will be very boring
because we use a blog.
But it turns out, doing Project-Based learning is very
interesting. I like this activity even more. This is very fun. I can express
thoughts that I've never imagined. I can be creative about my blog and of
course, my blog can be more useful. I am very happy and hope that my blog will continue in the
future with more weighty blog content.
3. The Advantages of The Project-Based Learning
The advantages that can be taken from Project-Based
learning is that I feel that this makes me pour more what is on my mind
(ideas). I can decorate blogs with funny animations. I also got new
friends and new experiences as well as new challenges.
The project that I really like is when I get the assignment
to create and post diaries. When I went to school in junior high school, I
often made diaries, whether I was happy or sad. And incidentally when the
project was announced, I just finished writing a diary which at that time I was
very happy. So I was very interested in immediately translating and completing
the task.
4. The Challenges of Doing The Project-Based Learning
The challenge that I get when working on Project-Based
learning is quite a lot. From the first project that was chatting with native
speakers which I had never even chat with outside people. Actually, if I
remember back at that time I was very afraid to start. My friends have started
working while I haven't. When many of my friends have finished, I just started,
and even then, accompanied by a close friend of mine. When I got the right
native speaker, I started conversation after conversation until the task was
finally finished.
The project that I really like is when I get the assignment
to create and post diaries. When I went to school in junior high school, I often
made diaries, whether I was happy or sad. And incidentally, when the project
was announced, I just finished writing a diary which at that time I was very
happy. So I was very interested in immediately translating and completing the
task.
When there was a project writing a postcard I was very
interested. Why? That's because I have never sent a postcard to anyone. At
first, I was confused about sending it to whom, but finally I chose to send it
to my brother. When I started writing the contents, there was a writing error.
I was sad and finally, I bought a new postcard with pictures that were funnier
than before. I began to write again with caution. The end of my poscard was
finished shortly afterward and I immediately posted to my blog.
5. My Feedback on How The Instructor (Ms. Devi Hermasari
S.Pd., M.A.) Facilitates The Process of Project-Based Learning
I feel, Ms. Devi the person is very positive thinking. She
always gives positive energy to his students, maybe to everyone. She is a
person who is always excited every day. The way to teach is very interactive
and easy to understand, she seems to be one with students. The way she teaches
is very different from other lecturers. Writing courses are fun and most
awaited courses.
I thought, Ms. Devi prepares the project and teaching
materials for each student perfectly, so that every project is always achieved
according to the target. The project provided also varies and always gives new
experiences to students. Hopefully, in the future, it will be better and more
varied because I am sure that the students are very happy when attending the
lesson. Thank you, Ms. Devi..
6. My Overall Impression on Doing the Project-Based Learning
My Overall Impression on Doing the Project-Based Learning
is very fun, very interesting, and very useful. This learning method is fun,
interesting, and useful because doing the Project-Based learning has new
experiences. It is also a challenge for me to complete each project given. I am
very agree and very happy with this method of learning because this is very
suitable for me. Project-based leaning really helps me to discipline time. With
this method, my writing skills are pretty much better.
About whether I will continue my portfolio in the future or
not, maybe sometimes when I have free time or I want to write, I will do it.
Maybe by writing a diary, writing cooking recipes, or just sharing stories of
my personal experiences.
Tuesday, December 25, 2018
Writing Script Vlog
Compare Popmie Dower and Popmie Gledeek
Spicy Noodle Review Vlog
Monologue
By
Sutria Hesti Prabawati
FINAL
December, 25 2018
FADE IN
1. MUSIC
2. TEASER [Showing some interesting scenes to
attract viewers]
3. INT. SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM
Tria sits
on the sofa.
Hi guys
this is Tria Prabawati. [ACT: smiling and waving hands at the camera]. Welcome
to my youtube channel. [EXPRESSION: happy and excited]. It is my first video. To be honest I was confused
what should I do in this video and then I decided to make this content. So, I would like to compare pop mie dower and
popmie gledeek. [ACT: Show the product].
Fyi both of them are kind of spicy noodle.
If you’re
wondering about my video, please keep on watching.
4. INT. SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM
Tria still
sits on the sofa.
First, I am
going to talk about the packaging. Both of them have the same colour, red. Which
means red to describing something spicy or something hot. [EXPRESSION: ecxited]
They also have the same size of the cup. [ACT: show the product but more
detail]
Now, let’s
open the cup. [ACT: open the cup and then take the mini pack].
For popmie
dower it contains two mini packs, there are seasoning and chilli oil. While popmie
gledeek it contains three mini pack, there are seasoning, chilli oil, and soy
sauce. There is a difference between them, popmie gledeek has dried vegetable
in the seasoning while popmie dower doesn’t. [ACT: show the mini pack].
Okay so let’s
jump to the next section which is compares the taste. But in this video, I
wouldn’t show how to cook the noodle step by step, so I want to go to the kitchen
right now to cook the popmie and then I’ll be back.
5. INT. SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM
Tria comes
after cook the noodle. [EXPRESSION: laugh]. [ACT: sit on the sofa].
Hi guys, I’m
coming back. So, the noodles are ready to eat. Uhm… Which noodle should I eat
first? Wait a second. [EXPRESSION: confuse]. [ACT: thinking].
Okay, I will
choose popmie dower. [ACT: sniff the smell of the noodle]. Hmmm.. This smell
really strong. Let’s eat the noodle. [ACT: eat the noodle].
The taste
of popmie dower is spicy but not that spicy because that spicy taste mostly
comes from the broth. I still can handle it. [ACT: give thumbs up and nodding
head].
Now, let’s
try popmie gledeek. But first, let me drink a glass of water to neutralize the
taste. [ACT: drink a glass of water and then take popmie gledeek]. [EXPRESSION:
very excited].
I think the
smell of popmie gledeek stronger than popmie dower. Hmm is that mean this
popmie gledeek is more spicier than popmie dower? Let’s just eat it!! [ACT: eat
the noodle].
Wow so
spicy! [EXPRESSION: pungency, sweating, the face became reddish]. [ACT: waving
hand because of pungency]
6. INT. SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM
Tria still
sits on the sofa.
To
conclude, I would say that both popmie dower and gledeek are delicious but
popmie gledeek is more spicier than mie dower. It’s recommended for you guys
who are love to eat spicy food because these foods are easy to find, you can
buy them at the minimarket nearby and also the price is affordable. [ACT: giving
thumbs up]. [EXPRESSION: smile].
7. INT. SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM
Tria still
sits on the sofa.
I think
this brings me to the end of the video, thank you so much for watching. Don’t
forget to give thumbs up, support me by subscribe to my youtube channel and give
your comment below. [ACT: pointing below].
I’ll see
you in my next video. Bye.. [ACT: waving hands]. [EXPRESSION: happy].
THE END
Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Write a Formal E-mail
Hi Friends. This time I'll show you how to write an E-mail for formal communication, enjoy!
Wednesday, November 7, 2018
Review
Hello Guys !!
I want to tell you
about movie review. I will review Korean dramas “Dream High” and only focus n
the character of the players.
This drama is a drama
that makes me try not to miss a single episode. In this drama the players are
beautiful and handsome. The story that was presented was very interesting. This
drama takes on the genre of romance, comedy, school, and drama, there are also
genres of music that are very harmonious. This drama takes on the genre of
romance, comedy, school, and drama, there are also genres of music that are
very harmonious. The drama has many good soundtrack songs, especially the main
song 'Dream High'. But this time I will not discuss the soundtrack, but 6
students who are the main characters in the drama, and here they are:
1. Suzy as Go Hye Mi
Go Hye Mi is the main character in this
drama. This beautiful girl is indeed very talented but does not have good
manners. It's really bad she even had to go to Kirin Art High School because she
was forced to pay off his father's debt. Previously, Hye Mi attended Juliard
High School, a seriosa singing school and had once duet with a famous seriosa
singer. Hye Mi also has a high level of self-confidence, although sometimes she
seems arrogant but Hye Mi cares deeply about her family and friends. Hye Mi
also doesn't want to look weak in front of other people and doesn't want to
depend on others. Her voice is really beautiful. Her trademark is bangs hair. In
its development hye mi is like an antagonist who turns into a protagonist with
a good girl.
2. Kim Soo Hyun as Song Sam Dong
Kim Soo Hyun is the only one who is not from
the singer's background of the many idol singers in this drama. Sam Dong is a
plain and little stupid village boy. Even though it was rather plump, but Sam
Dong had extraordinary musical talent. Sam Dong can play the piano without
knowing what keys are pressed, besides that he can also create songs, dance and
sing very well. Although he had refused to join Hye Mi to Seoul because he did
not want to leave his mother alone, Sam Dong followed Hye Mi in Kirin Art High School
because he had liked even crazy about Hye Mi. At this school Sam Dong
experienced many changes, from Sam Dong who was geeky to Sam Dong who was neat
and handsome. In the middle of the drama, it was told that Sam Dong had a
hearing loss. But Sam Dong was finally able to prove it that physical
deficiency does not mean losing everything.
3. Ham Eun Jung as Yoon Baek Hee
Baek Hee is a friend or maybe Hye Mi's best friend at
her old school, Juliard High School. It's just different class. Baek Hee is
also often referred to as a follower of Hye Mi, because he always looks like
Hye Mi. Baek Hee was also very happy when Hye Mi also auditioned to enter Kirin
Art High School. But their friendship turns into competition when Hye Mi
betrays her at the audition. And after that incident Baek Hee became a bad
person, cunning and cheating. He did it all so he could defeat Hye Mi who had
been on it. Basically Baek Hee seems to be a different person and changed his
appearance to be rather tomboyish.
4. Taecyeon as Jin Gook
Jin Gook is the son of an official, but the
relationship with his father is not good. Jin Gook is more likely to be a
street dancer. Jin Gook lives in an underground base camp, where Jin Gook and
his friends are. Jin Guk was initially not interested in entering or rather
auditioning at Kirin Art High School, until Teacher Kang (one of Kirin's
teachers) convinced him. Jin Guk is a childhood friend of Hye Mi, though it
seems like Hye Mi doesn't remember it. Jin Guk has extraordinary dance talent,
besides singing of course. Thanks to his enthusiasm, Jin Gook managed to become
the number one shining star of his friends.
5. IU as Kim Pil Sook
Kim Pil Sook is a fat girl who is good at playing guitar, piano and other musical instruments. Her voice was very beautiful when she sang. You could say she's multitalented. But there is one drawback. She is very fat. In my opinion, even though she is fat she still looks beautiful and sweet. She is often bullied by her friends, but still patient. When she was bullied Jason Jan once defended him and she was very happy. Then, the pleasure of Jason Jan from that incident turned into love. For Jason Jan's sake, she was willing to have a strict diet so that Jason Jan would accept it. After her diet succeeded, she turned into a girl who was idolized by boys. her body is very professional and beautiful. This very drastic change made many people barely recognize it. Including Jason Jan. luckily over time he realized that the girl was Kim Pil Sook.
6. Jang Woo Young as Jason Jan
In this drama, Jason Jan is a student who participates in student
exchanges from America. Jason Jan is good at anything. He is polite and not
picky in making friends. Unfortunately, his modesty to everyone can be
misinterpretend. He is considered a tantalizer. Including Kim Pil Suk. She is
often made a mistake by him.
Wednesday, October 24, 2018
Posting on Social Media
Hello friends, I have an assignment to pos photos on social media. I posted it on my personal Instagram and WhatsApp, I actually embarrassed. But it's okay for assignment.
Wednesday, October 17, 2018
Grammar Nazi
Would be better if it was written to “Thanks God for giving
bestfriends. Today I’m so happy with them. Thank you guys for making as your
bestfriend. Thank you for every moments. Big thanks for everyone. Love you all.”
This is a big mistake. The word “sweaty” must be replaced
with the word “sweety”. LOL
Maybe it’s better if it was written to “Because if a
relationship is smooth without problems, we would never learn whether or not it
is empowering.”
Would be better if it was written to “I’m so inspired the
way how he reaches the goal.. A man like him not just share the dream. But,
spread motivation, leads and pushes the limit.. That is the leader way.”
The word “is” must be replaced with the word “in”. So, the
correct sentence is “Location in the old castle”
Fucking, nice day ?? OMG. Can't use punctuation after the word "fucking" in this sentence.
This is ridiculous!!
Hey friends. I have an assigntment about Grammar Nazi. But, I'm not a grammar nazi. I haven't been able to talk about grammar to much. But I'm trying my best.
Wednesday, October 10, 2018
Sending a poscard
Hello Friends. I have an assignment to send a poscard. This is the firs time for me. If there is a mistake, Please criticze or comment. Thank you..
Monday, September 17, 2018
Chat with overseas people
This is my first time to chat with people of different countries. I'm afraid and nervous because I'm still a beginner in English. Her name is Taysir. She is 26 years old. She is from Tunisia and she is an interior designer😁😊
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