Wednesday, October 17, 2018

Grammar Nazi




Would be better if it was written to “Thanks God for giving bestfriends. Today I’m so happy with them. Thank you guys for making as your bestfriend. Thank you for every moments. Big thanks for everyone. Love you all.”


This is a big mistake. The word “sweaty” must be replaced with the word “sweety”. LOL


Maybe it’s better if it was written to “Because if a relationship is smooth without problems, we would never learn whether or not it is empowering.”


Would be better if it was written to “I’m so inspired the way how he reaches the goal.. A man like him not just share the dream. But, spread motivation, leads and pushes the limit.. That is the leader way.”



The word “is” must be replaced with the word “in”. So, the correct sentence is “Location in the old castle”


Fucking, nice day ?? OMG. Can't use punctuation after the word "fucking" in this sentence.


This is ridiculous!!




Hey friends. I have an assigntment about Grammar Nazi. But, I'm not a grammar nazi. I haven't been able to talk about grammar to much. But I'm trying my best.

5 comments:

  1. Overall good, but there is wrong typing word assigntment=assignment.
    I think "bestfriend" word must be spaced.

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  2. I think the word "every moments" should be "every moment" because "every" must be followed by a singular noun.

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    1. Okay. I'll correct my sentence again. Thank you Laila..

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  3. Thank for you gaes
    Gaes should be replaced by guys

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